The Big Write Winner (20/3/17): Alfie 5ST

A huge congratulations to Alfie in 5ST (pictured) who has been awarded this week’s Big Write trophy! Inspired by the (rather spooky) short film called ‘Wing’, he created a wonderful piece of writing full of delightful and encapsulating description. Here is his first paragraph, which is an absolute pleasure to read:

 

‘Wing’ by Alfie (5ST)

A raven flew across the blond, gold sky. The beautiful sun shimmered on her delicate wings and he beak was bent just under her body. Her uneasy squawk was frightening but she was nice and timid. Her feathers made her look so pretty. Two other beautiful creatures followed after.

Mr Woolway looks forward to reading all your new entries on Friday!